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Selasa, 27 Mei 2014

Narrative essay (I)



Birthday Surprise

Getting a surprise on our birthday was very amazing and unforgettable moment. So do I, I got my first birthday surprise when I was 14 years old and the surprise was happened in the school. It made me felt so special at that day and I loved my friends so much.
It was in 2008 on May fourth. When I went to school, the stranger things happened. In the class room, no one talked to me during the class. Even I already started the conversation with one of them, but he looked so seriously in reading his book. I looked around the class and I saw all of my friends showed flat face. They looked so serious in learning the lesson. After the class ended, then I went home. On the way home, I felt confuse because no one walked around me. They looked lost. I don’t know what happened to them at that time.
When I arrived in the front of a field near my school, one of my friends approached me and invited me to come in to the field. The surprise was begun. After I was inside, some of my friends gave me a cake with number 14 on it. I was very shocked to see that. Suddenly others friends sang a birthday song to me. I’ve never got birthday surprise before. So this was the first and the best surprise that I got.
After finished to celebrate my birthday, I could see clearly the ways they expressed my birthday. One of them approached me and said “happy birthday” gently. Some girls looked very shy when tried to say “happy birthday” to me. My close friends gave me a trap gift, where that gift contained concrete brick with a cut of paper. Although, I got it, I accept it. They prepared it all just to celebrate my birthday.
It was my first birthday surprise. I always remember it forever. The day when I felt so special and they are really my best friend forever.

1 komentar:

  1. wow, it is so interesting, right? :D
    yap. I really agree with you. Getting surprise in our birthday is really amazing and unforgettable moment in our life.
    I experienced it as well and I was so happy when I get it.
    You writing also really interesting. I am happy to read it. Good job, Agus.
    Keep writing :)

    BalasHapus