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Kamis, 31 Oktober 2013

Writing II Asignment: Space Order(describe a place) - Living room, My relaxation place.



I always spare my free time in my living room. Watching Tv is one of my activities in my living room. As a normal teenager, I also have my dreams and one of that is to have my own design living room in the future. A simple design but give a sense of calm in the soul. First, I will put red carpet as the base of my design in living room. I choose red color, because red color brings an energy, passion and warmth.  Next, on the top of the carpet I will put a black long table and on the table I will put my favorite comics or novels. I choose black color because I love black color and black color also makes me feel confident and relax. Then in front of the table I will place a black big cupboard and I will put television on it. To make the cupboard more beautiful I will decorate by placing candle next to the television. In back of the table, certainly I will place a white medium sofa and next to that sofa I will place small table to put my favorite snacks or candies.  And the last is on the left of the table I decorate the wall with some plants that have green color. The purpose of it is to make the room fresh and looks alive as in the nature. This is my design living room that I want to reach in the future.

1 komentar:

  1. Good writing but please look at the 3rd sentence. I think it would be better if you change "As a normal teenager, I also have my dreams and one of that is to have my own design living room in the future."
    into
    "As a normal teenager, I also have dreams and one of them is having my own design for my living room in the future."

    just advice. keep sharing and don't forget to visit mine.

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